Strengths and weaknesses

The Role of Writing in Political Science
Strengths:1. up to date with the sources
2. Structured very well
3. Analyzed differently
Weaknesses:1. The length of the conclusion is too long
2. too much redundant explanations
3. there are no quotations

Writing in Psychology
Strengths:1. personally explanations
2. clear words/phrases usage
3. analyzed from different viewpoints
Weakness:1.  not enough sources
2. wrong citation style
3. no paragraph structures at all

Writing as a Creative Writer
Strengths:
1. Very good citations
2. Many examples
3. descriptive
Weaknesses
1. No source authentication
2. Wrong citations
3. Long

Writing in the Field of Economics
Strengths:1.  Examples from the person
2.  Sources
3.  In-depth
weaknesses:
1. The conclusion is too long
2. Using the first person too much
3. To long
The Role of Writing in Engineering
Strengths:1. good citations which point out the usage of each source
2. explained each source clearly
3. many word choices
Weaknesses:1. all sources are from internet
2. Conclusion is short
3. Doesn't explain academic and non-academic

Writing in the Business Discipline
Strengths:1. quotations are used correctly
2.realistic examples
3.  examples of discipline
Weaknesses:1. not enough sources
2. didn't conclude everything
3. sources were not cited correctly

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